青虹剑 发表于 2006-8-2 21:42

[原创]今天高兴，不怕献丑

<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=5><STRONG>今天，大喜的日子，就不怕出丑了，将作于84年11月的一首诗（其时尚不懂格律，汗！）拿来献丑，请都来帮我斧正。</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG></STRONG></FONT> </P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>秋夜梦</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>黄梁一枕月明中，</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>反背琵琶奏荻风。</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>碎影悠悠忽静落，</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>大方落落问轻声。</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>小哥可有琵琶否？</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>舍妹求借一夕音。</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>何日琵琶藏陋室？</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>献芹犹愕手双擎。</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG></STRONG></FONT> </P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>返身复纵舞群星，</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>拂乐霓裳击玉瓶。</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>脚踩清风相应和，</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>指拨心韵互传睛。</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>皆喑万籁独幽曲，</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>尽隐千般唯墨绒。</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>此刻方知清世事，</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>群星明月两仙神。</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG></STRONG></FONT> </P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>馨香何处不觉来，</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>倩影翩跹踏叶青。</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>一曲了终弦尚颤，</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>二仙矣隐玉还鸣。</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>来时还借君之意，</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>作证秋云复寒宫。</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>冷暖不知良久立，</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#9611ee size=4><STRONG>东西难辨耳重萦。</STRONG></FONT></P>

舞殿冷袖 发表于 2006-8-2 21:49

嘿嘿，这么高兴啊？
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